well, it was good but not great!
personally, I think you might have just stepped all over a song that I have always loved, it's a good song nonetheless for the remix. you took a song that is alost impossible to get a good remix of in trance tecno or any of that genres, and you made a kinda good song, but I don't really like how it sounds in this remix. but good job on at least pulling off a not so bad sounding remix!